The first six panels still work really well, at least.

I mean, how much of our lives do we lose daily to this kind of bullet-point webslurping? The use of tweaked names looks kind of unnecessarily cautious to me now, but tell me it's not tempting to get lost in that screen.

The page should have ended with panel 6, though—would've been a good closing gag, and the fact that Shanna does research is easy to fold into the next page.