WHICH OF THOSE BALLOONS IN THE SECOND PANEL SHOULD BE READ FIRST???

Ahem.

I wrote the costume shop scenes in a costume shop. Don't think it helped the dialogue much, but the blocking is a lot better, especially when things turn violent.

Will and Katherine's role-played conversation is actually pretty plausibly cheesy. I wish I could say that was intentional. There's a great last line in the sequence, though. Jason wrote it. And I like the South Park, Power Ranger and Bart Simpson masks that he put in without my asking.

All right all right, I wasn't all bad: I think Will's awkwardness in the face of Katherine's know-it-all vamping, and the way he steers the conversation toward his comfort zone, works pretty well.